hey guys, been gone again, sorry. I have slept little and eaten less as finals approached and I studied like mad, but now thats finished and I am proud to tell you that I haven't been competley negligent towards my dreams of game design, and my school (Ohlone Community College) had a Game Devleopment festival (w00t) and I one of their areas of entry was Game Design. I didn't create a real design document, but they had a small outline document for download and all I had to do was provide the ideas. I did, and I ended up taking first place. I'm awefully surprised considering my school has two whole classes devoted to game design and I have not been able to attend even one as of yet.
Without further ado, I present the link of the "game doc" for freindly (or not so friendly) scrutinzation and critique!
Its a .doc, so I hope you've got word! (it was a requirement of the design process)
Hopefully will be frequenting the forums again, with finals all wrapped up and such.